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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-03-13 13:35:39 | In the eyes of the lord... | Was wayyyy too short. Good story line tho, perhaps you guys should have gone to the back of the cemetary for more privacy, and then you'd have more words to describe what is obviously some really hot action. Keep writing, i gv u an 8 for the idea, r |
| 2005-03-14 19:00:47 | In the eyes of the lord... | way to short be mor descrptive!! i give it an 7 |
| 2005-03-16 06:25:03 | In the eyes of the lord... | yeah good and its not bad you coulda gottin more desciption, better spelling goddammit and onger story but if and if you make part two please make sure you do what people are saying like make it longer, more description etc. 6/10 |
| 2005-04-01 19:51:20 | In the eyes of the lord... | make ur stories longer and horneyer u write good stuuf but rite more long(dipshit) |
| 2005-07-12 02:26:36 | In the eyes of the lord... | again my dear write a longer storie. you are a great writer. |