| 2005-03-19 15:46:41 |
My Sister's Friends
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Best fucking Story ever ! I gave it a 9 |
| 2005-03-19 20:14:20 |
My Sister's Friends
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Are you fucking nuts? This is trash, from start to finish. Messed up story, totally unbelievable, too convenient, with 4th grade errors all through it. It's trash!!! |
| 2005-03-19 21:47:25 |
My Sister's Friends
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This is fucking awesome as shit! You would be stupid to not write more....We thought it was even awesomer when we were drunk!!!!! Write more fucker! |
| 2005-03-19 21:55:48 |
My Sister's Friends
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I've defniatly seen better, I like the story, and most of the dialogue, but you should proof read your story next time. You started the story from a first person view, with brendon telling the story, but then out of nowhere you switched to third person. I also think you made brendon a bit innocent. I mean come on, he was 12 not 6. |
| 2005-03-20 01:36:29 |
My Sister's Friends
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write more! just like this! please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 |