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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-03-20 14:13:47 | My Sister's Friends | hey why dont you bring ur sister on that will be real fun |
| 2005-03-20 14:55:47 | My Sister's Friends | This is an excellent story. Is there a part 2. |
| 2005-03-20 17:58:53 | My Sister's Friends | @Mort That is a legit writing tactic, to switch from 1st - 3rd or 3rd- 1st, it helps convey the full stories |
| 2005-03-20 18:00:38 | My Sister's Friends | It got boring after a while. Its never fun when the guy's not having fun, but I would incourage you to write more cuz you have a good story line. also, check the grammar, it started out in the 1st person, then it changed to the 2nd. and you changed his name also. |
| 2005-03-20 18:24:35 | My Sister's Friends | OMG. I want more |