| 2006-11-24 03:20:19 |
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Good prolog |
| 2006-11-24 03:46:06 |
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Fuck pumps are my favorite phrase and favorite things in this world |
| 2006-12-28 07:02:51 |
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good start. hope to see it get better. |
| 2007-02-16 13:25:37 |
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You're a pretty good writer, but its a fantasy to believe prostitution can be that together. |
| 2007-03-23 12:42:41 |
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Well written. Nice intro. Makes me want to read more... |