| 2005-03-20 13:18:19 |
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Another very good chapter, keep up the good work. |
| 2005-03-20 17:51:51 |
CALL GIRL CHRONICLES 2- The Hotel Maid
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story is a 3/10 or 4/10 at best so you are ranked pretty good for this one, don't expect it to stay this high though after more avid readers see it and rate it, 4/10 |
| 2005-03-22 01:36:47 |
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that was a good story, it wasnt just the sex...which is why i think that you got suck a low rating on the siries...but you have real potential as a writer, the low rating is cuz people are just fucked, good job, 10/10 |
| 2005-03-22 09:33:12 |
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Top marks. A truly arousing piece of writing. And grammatical, thank god. Appreciated the woman's POV, and join others in encouraging you to keep writing. One more thing: don't change your style because a few idiots failed to see your quality - you're a cut above the competition; don't doubt that. |
| 2005-03-22 15:01:40 |
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awesome - I loved it - definitely worthy of a 9 |