| 2005-03-24 22:22:43 |
Seducing Simon
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Awesome story, write more of what happens! 10/10 |
| 2005-03-25 16:56:17 |
Seducing Simon
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There really wasnt more than teasing here. Angel you need to get your stuff together like the whole fact you were teasing him the whole time and then you give us no details. On top of that once you get to sucking on his dick and actually fucking him your story just goes into a blur of nothingness. No detail, no true sex or sucking and angel you got yourself a NO SCORE! |
| 2005-03-26 06:38:16 |
Seducing Simon
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booorrrriiiinng |
| 2005-03-26 10:47:49 |
Seducing Simon
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good but rushed spend more time on de3tails |
| 2005-03-27 23:52:40 |
Seducing Simon
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I agree--too rushed. No anticipation or anything. |