2005-04-05 18:06:19 |
Seducing Simon
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SOme of you guys might like sitting there wanking over some stupid shit that has nothign to do with sex but all the guys i've spoken to said they wud rather jerk off to a shorter story thats straight to the point. Stop reading into the fucking thing to much.. its a story!! and by the way im NOT indian im from england but moved to America last year |
2005-04-09 17:02:13 |
Seducing Simon
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too short |
2005-04-10 04:43:27 |
Seducing Simon
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It was short but it FUCKING HOT!! you should definately write alot more. YOU sound so SEXY, i'd go apes on you. |
2005-06-12 15:32:47 |
Seducing Simon
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I agree that it should be longer. It's a pretty good base but I think it needs more descriptions and sensations in it. 7/10 |
2005-06-18 18:33:08 |
Seducing Simon
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You had a good whole story leading up to the sex. It provides enough background and it really has a motive behind it. But then you basicall said " And then we had sex" |