| 2005-05-13 19:47:02 |
Take that Babysitter bitch
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Shit...the comments are decent..but a score of 2!!! JESUS CHRIST! |
| 2005-05-16 15:50:31 |
Take that Babysitter bitch
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take time to break the story down into chapters rather than trying to jumble it all into one chapter, more time on the ending- short and sweet sometimes better than giving a future..add more discription as the story line to this was good. keep on mate. |
| 2005-12-08 08:00:00 |
Take that Babysitter bitch
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yo the kid is 12 years old how many fuckin times can his little nuts cum already It was a good idea but not very believable. |
| 2006-03-02 02:49:31 |
Take that Babysitter bitch
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i missed the part where he unhandcuffed her to the pole in the headboard how is she using her hands if their still tied to the headboard? |
| 2006-04-01 14:36:57 |
Take that Babysitter bitch
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it was horrible. you are 12 and you are married. take it slow and break it down. it could have been better. this must be your first story. 1 out of 1000 |