| 2005-03-31 22:06:08 |
I like dares....
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Not bad for a first. You should watch your spelling, though. At one point you said the babysiter was a 'he', and some people don't like the boy/boy stories. Other than common spelling and grammar mistakes, it was pretty good. |
| 2005-03-31 22:55:47 |
I like dares....
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very good story make part 2 |
| 2005-04-01 20:07:12 |
I like dares....
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yo not bad man. Just watch the spelling znd stuff and make it longer. Waitin 4 part 2! |
| 2005-04-02 15:51:12 |
I like dares....
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shit i thought it was pretty good |
| 2005-04-02 20:58:13 |
I like dares....
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oh come on we need a part 2 it was great but a little short |