| 2007-01-27 00:41:41 |
My Brother's Smile
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actually i thought this story blowed da story line sucked ass learn how to write dipshi and who the hell is a hard ass in skool and is gay thats fuckin retarded |
| 2007-01-27 10:25:21 |
My Brother's Smile
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great story 10/10 |
| 2007-02-10 06:02:36 |
My Brother's Smile
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It needs some work... but it was alright |
| 2007-02-22 02:09:44 |
My Brother's Smile
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very unbeilievable |
| 2007-02-26 21:54:51 |
My Brother's Smile
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First, learn to spell. "Very unbeilievable?" Are you out of your mind? This was sooooo good. And it doesn't need any work. What is wrong with you people? This guy is good. Just admit it! 10/10 |