| 2007-08-06 02:23:43 |
My Brother's Smile
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Da he was still a hard ass but maybe ppl didnt know he was gay and the story was great but you should of went into more detail like the cock size but i loved the content your choice of vocabulary is good im 16 and have a brush on my older brother who is 17.5 |
| 2007-08-19 20:18:42 |
My Brother's Smile
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fantastic 10/10 |
| 2007-08-20 09:01:11 |
My Brother's Smile
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awsome |
| 2007-12-11 15:32:21 |
My Brother's Smile
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OK I got to admit that this was a wonderful story. Sexy but not really about the sex. The love these two felt for each other was more erotic to me than the very well done sex scene. Keep up the good work. |
| 2005-04-10 00:57:36 |
My stepsister_(0)
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Learn how to spell and use proper paragraphs, then come back and write part 2. |