| 2005-04-18 18:59:10 |
Stockroom
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This story was fucking awesome. You should keep writing and make all you stories this great not just a quick straight to the action story like other authors do. When Eric got so close to have some and then they where both shot down by the Micheal walking in i loved it because that is something you dont see often and that and other details made it a true work of art and i will be watching for more of your stories |
| 2005-04-19 18:54:44 |
Stockroom
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Very nice...please continue the story |
| 2005-04-20 17:16:18 |
Stockroom
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fucking great looking forward to part two |
| 2005-04-21 13:52:04 |
Stockroom
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cencered fucking tale 6/10 |
| 2005-04-21 15:34:53 |
Stockroom
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I'd like to do the author. Sounds like she's had some experience. |