| 2005-04-22 18:07:20 |
Jodi and Me Part 1
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who cares if its bakini u knew what he meant so stfu u big floppy donkey dick |
| 2005-04-23 07:18:29 |
Jodi and Me Part 1
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good theme but way too fast |
| 2005-04-23 16:17:07 |
Jodi and Me Part 1
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im confused! This guy is a virgin yet he is able to slam her against the wall and screw her? But otherwise it was a great story!!! Please continue! Good grammer from a guy born in Harlem, huh? I meant me!!:( Jk! |
| 2005-04-23 16:20:34 |
Jodi and Me Part 1
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Slow it down a bit, add more description to the actual sex, write a part 2 i wana kno what happens at the lake |
| 2005-04-23 22:02:17 |
Jodi and Me Part 1
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I agree with lucan. You need to slow this story way down. I also am looking forward to reading part 2, and please dont let the aunt join in as kennyt suggests - I read too many stories like that on this site! LoL ;-) |