| 2006-09-16 08:34:07 |
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The person who signed themselves "critique" and then appointed themselves to criticise your greeat story, is pretty well illiterate themselves. I wish they would not try to barge in when the big people are talking! |
| 2006-09-21 21:09:11 |
Wife's Night Out - Part 2
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fuck u |
| 2007-01-28 17:31:17 |
Wife's Night Out - Part 2
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wow there were some ummmm interesting comments, especially enjoyed the "fuck u" one because either the person doesn't get that you like to fuck so it wouldn't really be an insult, or they were trying to come onto you, either way, kind of amusing...anyway..about the story, I thought it was good, but then again almost all of your stories are, I like how you can write from either gender's point of view so well that I forget that it's a story you wrote, I give it a 9 |
| 2007-04-10 17:27:48 |
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yeah!!!!!!! she liked fucking deshawn { what kind of name is that anyways, deshawn.} with her ass while crystal sucked her pussy with that 15 yr old tongue. kimi will be back, and more of a whore than ever. once a whore, always a whore. thats why u kimiko, will always be a whore { kiss, kiss }. i can see it now. kimiko.75 yrs old and still a fucking cum slut, but doing it with 15 yr old virgin boys if she can find a virgin boy that old. and please people, give kimi the ratings she deserves 10/ 10 each and every time. kimiko u should be the top highest rated author on this site. i still find it hard to believe u almost stopped writing for xnxx. please keep writing. |
| 2007-07-15 14:30:57 |
Wife's Night Out - Part 2
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i liked the story and i get assholes saying the same things at first i agreed with them cause i sucked at spelling now i think they do it to be mean |