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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-07-27 09:34:00 | First time with my Neighbor! | it was ok i guess....did you get a retard to write the last few sentances? ''I saw her barefeet bents beutifull. I rubbed the bottome side which was sticking up'' - this shit makes no sense!!! and what's the ending all about? who cares if the key is turning? they're wearing clothes...you want tension...leave them naked...go back to school and learn how to write...jeez 2/10 |
| 2007-09-08 05:47:36 | First time with my Neighbor! | try spell check, try writing longer story, try to get a life |
| 2007-10-14 17:34:14 | First time with my Neighbor! | Pure fucking crap in it's nastiest form. Complete shit !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| 2005-04-18 12:26:07 | The Seduction of my Wife | liked the story, to bad she enjoyed it right off the bat, alittle restriction could have been an added bonus. write another one |
| 2005-04-18 18:36:07 | The Seduction of my Wife | I look forward to the continuation of this no doubt involving others |