| 2006-11-09 14:53:21 |
Feast of the Flesh
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I'm confused. Trimi is a beautiful woman and somewhat liked and a respected huntress, yet the prize of the feast is to be raped? The brutality of this story makes no sense. The attitudes of her peers makes even less sense. "Tear her up," "Rape her dead," and "It's about time!" What the hell is that all about?! Finally, the ending is... disgusting in the sense that the destruction of Trimi's beauty serves no purpose without her being guilty of something, but of what the author never says. Rape and cruelty has their place as punishment and grounds for punishment, but to use it just to jackoff is mind numbing in its thoughtlessness and is simply misogynistic. Well, for that I rate this story with contempt and a 1/10. Hate is earned, Chagrin. I hope you enjoy it. |