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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-12-21 20:25:38 | Punishing an Angel (mon) | are you gonna continue on with this series, i mean even after friday is done? |
| 2006-03-13 17:08:40 | Punishing an Angel (mon) | some spelling mistakes but it was pretty good |
| 2006-06-09 13:40:55 | Punishing an Angel (mon) | Great story- could use a little more detail and most definately needs a spell check. Tube as opposed to tub is distracting. Keep up the good work! |
| 2006-06-12 21:46:36 | Punishing an Angel (mon) | like it |
| 2007-12-17 21:51:00 | Punishing an Angel (mon) | Seriously...do you KNOW what grammar is? This story has a great line, but beyond that...ICK. The spelling is atrocious, pick a tense (present v. past), and its a story, not a picture. The Devil is in the details. Please get some. |