| 2006-01-07 13:27:19 |
Punishing an Angel (wed)
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This is real psychological storytelling. It's boiled down, and it has an immedeate style. I really liked it. The situation is intense, but the story doesn't obsess over one point of view. I could feel the sparks between them. This submission dominates, Traci. |
| 2006-03-09 23:45:08 |
Punishing an Angel (wed)
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not a bad read. I sympathize with the girl totally. xoxoxox Tx again, vanessa |
| 2006-06-12 21:57:19 |
Punishing an Angel (wed)
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reading them in order like this series... |
| 2005-04-29 04:35:02 |
Punishing an Angel (thurs)
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awsome...cant wait til the end |
| 2005-05-01 18:11:48 |
Punishing an Angel (thurs)
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ive done better action than this myself. |