| 2005-05-12 07:20:22 |
Summer Night Part Two
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How this got in the "Top rated" category, I have no idea. The lack of some necessary punctuation makes it very hard to read and understand. The people who seem to like this story have the same malady. Makes you wonder. |
| 2005-05-12 16:24:42 |
Summer Night Part Two
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Wow, I like this one. Tee hee. Could use dome better punctuation though.. I wish I had a brother, |
| 2005-05-13 04:25:41 |
Summer Night Part Two
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Good Story line ... brother / sister part is hot as fuck but the mom thing wasn't very realistic ... |
| 2005-05-13 11:13:56 |
Summer Night Part Two
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Love it when a plan "cums" together. HOT story. MORE! |
| 2005-05-13 19:52:07 |
Summer Night Part Two
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Good story. I'd of cum twice. but saving it for the bitch cumming over tonight. Gave 9/10, you have to puncuate. |