| 2005-09-08 10:03:29 |
No Downs, Just UPS
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Wow great story, please tell us more... |
| 2005-05-10 22:42:52 |
Paradise Valley 6, Celebration
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tiring to read |
| 2005-05-13 03:48:08 |
Paradise Valley 6, Celebration
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They keep getting better. The first couple were good, but not as well written. But this is tip top. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
| 2005-05-09 15:59:33 |
Movie girl
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Grammar, spelling, all these things should have been checked, and when that had been done the story should have been deleted as it was pure garbage....not in the slightest bit erotic....god, I just wasted 2 minutes reading this crap, not even going to rate it!!!!! |
| 2005-05-10 13:37:13 |
Movie girl
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rubbish |