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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-09-24 08:59:45 | Morning wake up call | who the fuck has 205lb of pure muscle at 17 years old??? It takes years to develop that much muscle, other than that the story was good. Do a bit more research next time. |
| 2005-05-09 17:29:59 | The Dance_(1) | An excellent beginning to what could be a very hot story. I hope there is a part 2 cumming, b/c that was merely a tease. I don't want to tell u what to do... but i'd rewrite this, and introduce joe's wife to mike, maybe mike could get her to dance. Dance is, or can be a major part of foreplay, and you are trying to seduce your readers with sexual tension. And there was not enough(tension). I gav u 7 for the idea. r |
| 2005-10-31 23:44:48 | The Dance_(1) | 2/10 |
| 2005-05-11 00:55:51 | Ricardo | hot but not hot enough. you write very well you just need to keep going 7/10 |
| 2005-05-24 08:55:34 | Ricardo | Caught sight of my name in passing and had a look. Disappointed! More imagination needed... at least on THIS site. Try writing for the more racy womens' magazines! |