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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-11-30 04:34:33 | After School Snack | It was good, lil on the short and sweet end of things. Try saoring the fuck scenes more, paint a picture for the reader. I like the cliffhanger ending, definitely opens a door for sequel. |
| 2006-03-07 01:55:31 | After School Snack | i love teacher pussy |
| 2007-08-17 14:58:21 | After School Snack | a little short, but good |
| 2007-12-17 17:04:43 | After School Snack | how about a paragraph every now and again. maybe a little punctuation also. good concept though |
| 2007-12-20 15:22:31 | After School Snack | chapter 2 maybe? :D |