| 2005-05-13 07:22:50 |
Tommy's Nympho Sisters
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What a suck story , I can't even put my finger on it ,it just plain sucked |
| 2005-05-14 11:05:15 |
Tommy's Nympho Sisters
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wow, that was pretty crappy. i got confused really fast on that shit. That just plain sucked. |
| 2005-06-10 03:00:46 |
Tommy's Nympho Sisters
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Ok,Dude.Stfu for one..noe more stories...they suck..i couldnt even get hard...on this storie.. ok..just stfu.. and stop... leave it to the real porn people LOL :P LOVE Drako, |
| 2005-06-24 19:18:39 |
Tommy's Nympho Sisters
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this story was average but better than what other people are saying dont give up man put a big more into ur stories and maybe try to stick to one major climx instead of putting 3 or 4 small ones through the story |
| 2005-08-03 18:57:50 |
Tommy's Nympho Sisters
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Yeah tht story's crap, u change tenses every few secs from I to Tommy, and ure grammar and spelling is horrible. you need to go and take a class in english before writing again |