| 2005-05-18 20:05:03 |
Megan Pt. 2
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I agree with rudhrd one. I love incest and this was a good story but your only going to get a nine because of the big part where u repeated yourself. otherwise it was good spelling and grammar and you really got me going...good job. 9/10 |
| 2005-05-18 23:33:47 |
Megan Pt. 2
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My bad on the repeating part. |
| 2005-05-19 00:47:46 |
Megan Pt. 2
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awesome story 9/10 one point away for the repetativness. encore! |
| 2005-05-19 06:37:59 |
Megan Pt. 2
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10/10 but i no it's your bad but please try and avoid repeating paragraphs. otherwise encore! |
| 2005-05-19 13:29:11 |
Megan Pt. 2
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Sorry again for repeating the paragraph. I was re-editing over several times so I just lost my mind at some point and did not catch the repeat. |