| 2005-05-29 15:59:25 |
Megan Pt. 2
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First post and thought it was a great story 10/10 |
| 2005-05-30 09:57:00 |
Megan Pt. 2
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i would have liked for the girlfriend to have walked in and noticed that Megan had some white stuff on her cheek and thought could the two had been fuckin or had Megan had just given her brother a blow-job'the thought was starting to arouse the girlfriend |
| 2005-05-31 16:49:35 |
Megan Pt. 2
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Work on your dialog a bit, but, other than that, a great story. |
| 2005-05-31 18:29:52 |
Megan Pt. 2
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hot story put another story like that and you will be a great authors plus you should write this in erotica stories like all your stories there great! |
| 2005-06-03 16:43:44 |
Megan Pt. 2
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I missed out ... not having a sister like that. |