| 2005-05-21 13:34:00 |
Sex With Alien Females
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Mysterious nice good job |
| 2005-05-21 17:22:33 |
Sex With Alien Females
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First we had two blondes then one brunette and a blonde? |
| 2005-05-21 21:19:39 |
Sex With Alien Females
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That's pimp shit. I liked it, because it was wierd. I usually don't like stories this wierd but this one was good. 10/10. (If that seems a little too high for this story it's probably because I'm really fucked up right now) |
| 2005-05-23 09:09:39 |
Sex With Alien Females
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Why do people think that just because they're writing about utter crap they can forget the principles of grammar? This garbage was inncoherent and boring because of it. This story could be so much better if needless words were removed and errors were fixed. |
| 2005-05-23 23:53:12 |
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Sorry, this was lame. Atleast use spellchecker, but always read and reread before posting. Have a friend read. Then, when you think it's ready to post, sleep on it for a week and then proof again. Oh and have a good story to tell. This is just crap. |