| 2005-06-10 03:58:39 |
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That was the greatest story i have ever read |
| 2005-06-10 04:13:47 |
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wow that was fucking long but worht it! i liked the part where you had both girls in your controll! i masturbated seriously 4 times during that!! if you have anymore storys write them!! |
| 2005-06-10 09:21:29 |
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omg.... best story EVER WRITTEN!!!!!!! 10/10!!!!!
NO... MORE than 10/10.... 1000000/10!! |
| 2005-06-10 10:15:59 |
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OMMFG! You totally rock. 10/10. you earned it. but what was that rape part at the last bit? i thought Mandy wanted sex with Mike? (note: I relooked at it and it looks like he still was drugged) but everything is great. People should learn to write storiers like you the 'master'. |
| 2005-06-10 14:19:26 |
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this is very overrated, probably some writer rating and comments also, crock 1/10 |