| 2005-06-10 14:56:36 |
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absolutely fantastic. i loved every minute of that. Definitly the best one i have ever read. |
| 2005-06-10 15:36:01 |
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please write more!!!!!!!! |
| 2005-06-10 16:19:00 |
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omfg DUDE AWSOME STORY GOTO RIGHT A PART 2 MAN THIS MAKES ALL OTHER STORIES LOOK LIKE SHIT DUDE PLZ WRITE A APRT 2 THSI IS FUCKIN AWSOME!!!!!!! |
| 2005-06-10 16:20:42 |
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these fucking writers rating their own stories and leaving commn=ents under different aliases 1/10 |
| 2005-06-10 19:10:39 |
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AN old guy suducing a tenn is lil' xtreme and unrealistic... |