| 2005-06-12 21:23:29 |
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hey man, very rarely do I read a story that ultimately takes me out of the mood, but that's what this does. That was the dumbest ending to any story I've ever read. Plus, you could've made the girl like 14 or 15 to make it less fucked up to begin with. If you wanna write stories about rape, send them to Paul Shanley, don't post them here, fucking dumbass. |
| 2005-06-12 22:46:08 |
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I agree with all the other postings. It was the ULTIMATE story until the ending part with the ass rape. Even that wouldn't have been so bad if the end hadn't sucked so much. Keep writing! Please! |
| 2005-06-12 23:54:05 |
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man i love anal rape |
| 2005-06-13 03:21:21 |
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WAY TOO LONG
And whats with the age and rape |
| 2005-06-13 07:07:35 |
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I kind of agree with the others, Though my wife and I play like that every now and then. But we don't play it to the point of hurting each other. So it could be that he wanted to send her home with a ruff one, So she wouldn't be so willing to come around , When his wife and kids came back. So he wouldn't get busted. I don't know it is hard to say.
But anyway the story was GOOD. and I give it a 09/10. |