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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-06-14 18:21:43 | My Two Girlfriends | Damn! What a set-up! The next story will be so damn hot. (It also happens to be one of my fantasies.) You write good descriptions and great dialogue. Indent your paragraphs or add line breaks to improve readability. Don't forget the *heterosexual* character you have created for Maggie. It will be a nice difference from all the rest of the stories if she doesn't get totally involved with Leah. I'm looking forward to part two! |
| 2005-06-22 00:55:57 | My Two Girlfriends | killer story |
| 2005-06-22 10:11:47 | My Two Girlfriends | good stuff, get the next bit done soon! |
| 2005-06-22 11:25:18 | My Two Girlfriends | C--R--A--P still spells crap doesn't it? well, that is what this crap is, 1/10 |
| 2005-06-22 12:48:54 | My Two Girlfriends | Rubbish, I was all stood up with no where to go! 4/10 |