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Date Story title Comment
2008-03-22 22:46:58 Happy Birthday_(1) despite what the rest of these people say: I thought it was good. Yes, the spelling, punctuation and plot needed a little work, but it shows a lot of potential. Keep it up.

-Tip
2008-04-09 23:41:07 Happy Birthday_(1) I liked the story itself, but poor grammar is just a pet peeve of mine, especially in adult stories.
2005-06-12 22:12:01 Your Order is Ready,Ma'am Oh come on! That was actually getting kind of good... shitty ending.
2005-06-13 21:08:53 Your Order is Ready,Ma'am I don't think that I even want to read the second part after that shitty ending.
2005-06-14 00:17:09 Your Order is Ready,Ma'am very shitty ending. you need to work on detail more then just he ate her out. she immediately clmaxed... thats just shitty writing.
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