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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2008-03-22 22:46:58 | Happy Birthday_(1) | despite what the rest of these people say: I thought it was good. Yes, the spelling, punctuation and plot needed a little work, but it shows a lot of potential. Keep it up. -Tip |
| 2008-04-09 23:41:07 | Happy Birthday_(1) | I liked the story itself, but poor grammar is just a pet peeve of mine, especially in adult stories. |
| 2005-06-12 22:12:01 | Your Order is Ready,Ma'am | Oh come on! That was actually getting kind of good... shitty ending. |
| 2005-06-13 21:08:53 | Your Order is Ready,Ma'am | I don't think that I even want to read the second part after that shitty ending. |
| 2005-06-14 00:17:09 | Your Order is Ready,Ma'am | very shitty ending. you need to work on detail more then just he ate her out. she immediately clmaxed... thats just shitty writing. |