| 2005-06-14 13:13:09 |
Your Order is Ready,Ma'am
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it was good cept for the ending, carry it on with hinm going to the chicks house and boning here and her sister |
| 2005-12-14 22:38:03 |
Your Order is Ready,Ma'am
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your ass sucks canal water |
| 2006-10-06 00:47:11 |
Your Order is Ready,Ma'am
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yeah the ending sucked and i dont think you can pop your cherry with just fingering, i would have popped mine already.... |
| 2007-07-15 17:00:49 |
Your Order is Ready,Ma'am
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THE BASTARD OF A OWNER MUST DIE!!! |
| 2005-06-29 22:56:24 |
Watching and Waiting
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ELABORATE. The plot wasn't bad...but it was like, BAM BAM BAM, story over. You need to make it longer, and go into more detail. |