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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-06-15 23:18:23 | Part 2 - View from the deck. | You have the talent for writing stories. I suggest that you try to get a cohesive story to tie all the parts together, that is if you plan on making several more stories. I found that character development through a cohesive story is really what keeps the stories good and going, and it helps you stay focused and effective as a writer. |
| 2005-06-23 01:16:21 | Part 2 - View from the deck. | I enjoyed both of your stories very much and It seems that you and your guy are really in love. I've never given head because i have-lol-well lets just say I have very disciplined self control and I want the first to be REALLY special..........once again I enjoyed your stories and became aroused so you deserve credit babe........ ;-) have a good one and keep up the good work. |
| 2005-06-23 19:39:18 | Part 2 - View from the deck. | Excellent story. You have a very erotic mind and it comes out in your writing. Your story characters are classy. |
| 2005-12-27 10:52:20 | Part 2 - View from the deck. | great story hot. same thing happened to me and wife, but neighbor joined in for orgy, once a week for 5 years 3d couple finally joined. |
| 2005-06-14 23:59:25 | Perverted Kids | learn to spell check yourself... it's fair not fare |