| 2005-06-17 20:12:30 |
Perverted Kids
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GREAT STORY..IM NOT REALLY ONE FOR ALL THE SHIT EATING (THATS ALITTLE TO KINKY FOR ME) BUT THE STORY STARTED OFF GOOD AND QUICKLY GOT INTO THE ACTION AND KEPT GOING FROM THERE...NEVER A DULL MOMENT..THE ENDING WAS ALITTLE LAME BUT I SUPPOSE YOU CAN WORK ON THAT BUT OVER ALL I GIVE IT A 71/2 OUT OF 10 |
| 2005-06-17 20:26:49 |
Perverted Kids
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Written by a minor. I show you mine then you show me yours. Horrible. Horrid. Horrendous. Sounds like little Red Riding Hood or some equally mundane crap. |
| 2005-06-18 02:24:49 |
Perverted Kids
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You did it again you made me cum twice in one story,thanks keep writting |
| 2005-06-18 05:08:31 |
Perverted Kids
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Terrific...great story...made me cum twice...wow! Try re-writing it when you're less horny to get the grammer and details correct. 10/10 |
| 2005-06-18 22:31:18 |
Perverted Kids
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Great story i loved it! |