| 2005-06-24 02:26:25 |
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Good story, but try to build up to it, make it seem more real. |
| 2005-06-24 03:02:43 |
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well done |
| 2005-06-24 05:33:13 |
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Yo, Conch. Learn to fuckin read. The spelling in this story is actually pretty good. Maybe you should read some of the other stories, in which "characters" is "chrractrs"... Jesus H Christ. Y' fuckin critics can't see worth bloody shit. I'm half blind, and at least I can see it. This story is good. *Bitch slaps to Conch and A Critic!* |
| 2005-06-24 13:33:32 |
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THOSE GIRLS MUST BE FUCKING THEIR DAD AND MOM TO BE THAT EXPERIENCED THAT YOUNG. THEY DON'T SEEM TO BE WORRIED ABOUT BEING CAUGHT - JUST ENJOYING THE FEEL OF A COCK IN THEIR CUNT AND ASS AND A MOUTH SUCKING THEIR PUSSY. THE SEVEN OF THEM WILL HAVE TO HAVE A NICE FUCK SESSION IN THE NEXT CHAPTER. |
| 2005-06-24 17:40:42 |
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great story man you have made my tight pink pusst hot and wet |