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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-07-01 22:03:24 | THE GIRLS NEXT DOOR_(2) | wow,if ure #2 is gonna be like this 1 then i suggest not doing it.its not evan worth reading.go fuck ure mom okay basterd ew! |
| 2005-07-01 22:28:00 | THE GIRLS NEXT DOOR_(2) | wow that max kid is fkn dumb.it was a frk made up story.a bad 1 i might add. |
| 2005-07-02 00:13:54 | THE GIRLS NEXT DOOR_(2) | make a part 2 |
| 2005-07-02 14:06:04 | THE GIRLS NEXT DOOR_(2) | ok, your spelling does leave me kind of upset...but other then a few stupid mistakes it wasnt that bad...i mean i could have gotten off to this story if i chose to. the sisters seem to willing to fuck, it was to fast. i suggest you write a second story, but have someone proof read it or somethin i mean...dang. not to mention try thinking of an original story, this seems just like another fantasy gone to far. btw everyone that is dissing on the authors spelling, a few of you made some spelling errors...hypocrites. it was a good story. but like they said, to quick, dont fuck the mom (incest is in my opinion disturbing and wrong i mean its your mom for christs sake!) and try harder with spelling. 7/10. 9 for a story in itself (it has potential) and 5 for mistakes and shit. |
| 2005-07-02 15:36:01 | THE GIRLS NEXT DOOR_(2) | Really good base, for future chapters. 8/10 These people, like "indifferent", should not comment on grasmmer & spelling , unless theirs is perfect. (They are not.) I is always capitalized , TOO is Athe word to use when you mean "also", not "to". |