| 2005-07-09 18:46:46 |
Autumn pt 5
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Excellent part 5. Maybe it's me but the character Paul is more sleezy than the dad. Does anyone else agree? |
| 2005-07-09 21:33:59 |
Autumn pt 5
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Autumn, dont worry about Dipshit, he wouldnt know a good story if it hit him in his head then nailed him in the balls 10/10 your a great wiriter with emormous potential |
| 2005-07-10 20:50:58 |
Autumn pt 5
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Paul is alittle sleezey because he didnt know how much autumn needed her but now that he's with her...maybe his sleeziness is a good thing in this case? Im totally drawn in by this story and cant wait for part 6, i dont even read the stories for something to masturbate to like idid the first one now there like a novel to me...10/10 as usaul |
| 2005-07-10 22:34:23 |
Autumn pt 5
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Autumn, you continue to unfold one hell of a storyline. I can't believe veovis hasn't seen it yet. If you write it, I'll read it....anyplace, anytime. Simply good writing, girl. Hope to read more... |
| 2005-07-10 23:34:26 |
Autumn pt 5
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AntiBitch, thank you--and Veovis, too. :-) My main goal was to see if I could write it. This actually *is* my first story, and it's harder than I'd thought at first--my hat is off to the regular writers, bigtime! And you guys are so sweet, and you rock! Hugs! |