| 2005-07-11 18:36:28 |
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Wow! I loved it! Please hurry up with the sixth part!!! |
| 2005-07-12 22:28:51 |
Autumn pt 5
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YES!!! Finally got to read it. I accidentaly (did I spell that right?) missed an internet payment and haven't been able to get on! Anyway...Holy shit Autumn...that was amazing! You tricked me though. I thought it was over and then BAM! "...the basement door slammed shut..." My heart dropped but my curiosity and intrigue flared up more than ever! What a crazy fuckin' cliffhanger yet again! Amazing Autumn. You continue to shock and awe everyone who reads your great works. All 5 are amazing. And to think back to that day long ago when I stumbled upon your first way back when. I couldn't be happier that I did. It was most definetely worth the wait, trust me. While I can't wait for #6 I know that I most certainly can. As usual I'll be checking back, commenting on shit. Hope to talk to you all! |
| 2005-07-13 00:38:41 |
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Oh and I gotta admit I kinda have a funny feeling about Paul too. It's hard to believe that he is in on all of this but at the same time it would fit so well. But he is definetely not sleazier than Daddy. Man alive Autumn, if you ARE going to kill him it would be very hard for me to imagine an appropriate death for him. Well...it's easy to imagine many many deaths, some long some short, but trying to choose one, that's hard. I would have to make it really long, like 3 weeks. I would give him a blood transfusion to keep him alive. And I would make Mommy watch the whole time. Unless she wants him dead too. I would let her do shit to him too. Like shoving a red hot fire poker up his ass like 2 feet and then leaving it there so the tissue heals to it, then yank it out!!!!!!! YAAHHHH!!!!!!! cya |
| 2005-07-13 14:08:59 |
Autumn pt 5
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that was some of the nastiest stuff ever!!!!Love raping little girls tiny assholes> |
| 2005-07-13 22:20:12 |
Autumn pt 5
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This will sound a little smarmy, but don't kill the dad. Though a zillion almost appropriate things come to mind, killing him would keep us from reading about his prison term exploits! Veovis, you are the best. Autumn, I repeat my earlier statement, if you write it, I'll read it. |