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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-11-29 15:32:34 | Kimmie's Fantasy 1 | i jacked of so hard 2 ur story keep ehm cummin lol |
| 2005-12-28 02:24:26 | Kimmie's Fantasy 1 | Very, Very well written, There is a few small fixes but Excellent Story Heather Continue the good work I give U a 10/10 and some. |
| 2005-12-28 03:35:56 | Kimmie's Fantasy 1 | One Question ? Why do people like Adolfo Hitlor live in a WORLD that dosent exist Come join us in REALITY my friend There will and never be what U so call white power GROW UP if U dont like this site stay away DO something thats worth living for !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| 2006-01-06 11:13:09 | Kimmie's Fantasy 1 | truly magnificent! more please. |
| 2006-01-21 21:55:57 | Kimmie's Fantasy 1 | Good Story ... the Beginning is a dead hook but for some reason you got VERY corny with all the " ahh geez sis " shit ... wayy wayy too " Leave it to beaver" no pun intended lol ... you have very good detail ... try to apply the same detail to what they are saying and keep it up throughout the story,,, over all good story could use some work in your writing ... keep it up |