| 2005-11-09 10:18:47 |
Kimmie's Fantasy 1
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Great story. Reminded me of when my sis and I fucked. 10 |
| 2005-11-11 13:04:23 |
Kimmie's Fantasy 1
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A good well structured story. The characters were a little two demensional and the language was a little cheesy in places (“Jesusss, little sis! You are one tasty piece of pussy!) but all in all a good reworking of the classic. I kind of wished she would have added her lesbian experience to the sexy talk up prior to the climax. Also, they seemed to sober up a little fast (Stoly is hard on teen girls). Good work, keep writing. |
| 2005-11-12 10:27:39 |
Kimmie's Fantasy 1
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wonderful story!!! I see you haven't posted one in so long! Hope to see some more like this soon. |
| 2005-11-15 03:29:18 |
Kimmie's Fantasy 1
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Is sucking this bad something you have to work at? Or does it come naturally for you???? 1/10 |
| 2005-11-17 03:56:35 |
Kimmie's Fantasy 1
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good story... too much BABY SISTER.. a 9 |