| 2007-07-15 01:28:22 |
Sister Taning
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Not a horrible story but not exactly original. There were two cum shots in the space of a paragraph... it's almost like you were trying to write as little as possible during the actual sex acts. Um, also I hardly think she'll suck his dick just because he has video of her naked, the video would be more incriminating for him seeing as he stripped his sister and played with her while she was sleeping. If you had just entered in how she had lusted after him or something to the like it would be believable but with no animal attraction it just makes no sense. Nice try, but you have a lot of work. Still, it was pretty hot. 6/10 |