| 2005-09-02 08:12:20 |
I'll touch yours if you touch mine.
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that was really good, just put a couple of my stroies on here, not sure wen u can read them |
| 2006-05-30 22:08:21 |
I'll touch yours if you touch mine.
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i donno i kinda got bored and made a snack half way lol not saying im fat or anything because i have a surprisingly hi motab it was a good story thought just a bit sudden hey some guy bust stop wana have sex ok done but other then the boring plot/ story line it wasnt bad if u decide make more try adding a little more detail like u find in some of the fantasy stories or fictionals surprisingly they allways seem to b alot more detailed then true storys o well 6/10 |
| 2005-07-20 23:50:01 |
4 Curious college Girls: Ch4 Take It As It Comes
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very good keep up the good work 8/10 keep writing |
| 2006-09-13 17:43:24 |
4 Curious college Girls: Ch4 Take It As It Comes
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Wow, these stories are great! Can't wait to read the next one. I'm dripping wet! |
| 2007-04-19 01:30:11 |
4 Curious college Girls: Ch4 Take It As It Comes
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awesome im srry it deserves more than tht but its like 1:00 in the morning where i am and im fuckin tired lmao get it |