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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-07-19 15:57:04 | young Mandy | Boy, 14 and easy. I wish I had met a girl like her when I was in my early teens. Round two should be even steamier. |
| 2005-07-20 05:29:04 | young Mandy | Hm. It was a good story, except for the fact that you can't spell to save your life. Your lack of spelling and punctuation made this story an effort to read and thus lessened the impact that it might have had otherwise. When someone speaks, put quotation marks around what they say, like so: I said: "Hi!" It makes it a lot easier to read. Your sentence structure was terrible as well, something that you should work on. Besides that, it was a good story. Keep up the good work. 4/10 |
| 2005-10-27 20:09:41 | young Mandy | this was writen by a lil boy wtf man its shit |
| 2005-12-11 20:37:45 | young Mandy | dude it was coolbut what the hell get to the action u dumb ass |
| 2005-12-29 16:43:01 | young Mandy | Good story. very hot. can't wait for more |