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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-08-03 15:20:02 | Nicki | Great story. please write a part 2 |
| 2005-08-04 02:55:40 | Nicki | Wow... haven't read this story in quite some time... at least 7 years. I almost forgot about it, but I still like it. |
| 2005-08-04 05:24:14 | Nicki | Holy shit, this story is a tenner (10/10) damn good, everything is great/perfect, and the first paragraph is funny because of this: "Steve put down the heavy trunk he was carrying and turned to watch the small figure on the path far below struggling with two heavy suitcases. In the far distance, he could just make out his rusting Ford pickup parked at the end of the dusty road that wound up from the valley floor far below. His cabin commanded a view he never tired of. Unless, of course, he was carrying a fucking steamer trunk full of fucking rocks up the fucking mountain on the hottest fucking day of the fucking year." Now I'm sure that gets you 8 points plus 2 for the rest of the story. make another chapter doing lots of hardcore. *clap clap* |
| 2005-08-04 09:33:42 | Nicki | Great story Part two PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE |
| 2005-08-04 19:17:42 | Nicki | super nicely written . . . let's have more about those two. terrific pace and interesting scenario. way to go. |