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Date | Story title | Comment |
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2005-08-06 18:48:00 | My niece Sally, We've had better days | there's nothing wrong with this story except one small detail. Make up your mind whether Leesha's lover is French or Italian. His name is Franco (typical Italian name), although you refer to him as French, but then he said to Leesha, "Mi amore." That's Italian again. So what is he? French or Italian. The story is a good set-up for more to come, I hope. |
2005-08-06 22:40:47 | My niece Sally, We've had better days | maby he's a french italian. |
2005-08-06 23:09:27 | My niece Sally, We've had better days | Come on, man. You set us up like a strip club. He better be comin out hittin that next time! |
2005-08-07 08:00:14 | My niece Sally, We've had better days | Wow. Great story! It would have been even better if Mark had fucked Sally, but otherwise it was great - extremely well thought-out and written. |
2005-08-07 08:23:07 | My niece Sally, We've had better days | hey you! that was a great attorny and cheating scenes you got there. but please write more! the suspense is killing the readers [especially me] so I got two words for you... common, common! 10/10. |