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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-09-07 15:34:01 | Great Mom Pt. 6 | THIS ONE WAS THE HOTTEST'I REALLY LOVED IT WHEN MOM WAS JACKIN THE BOY'S OFF WHILE TALKING TO HER BOSS'NOW THAT IS EXCELLENT WRITING' NOW DO THE SAME THING BUT PUT MOM'S SISTER IN PLACE OF HER BOSS |
| 2005-12-01 19:04:06 | Great Mom Pt. 6 | Still liking this series of stories but there is too much repetition. These guys must eat Viagra for meals instead of food. They sure are cummin bastards. Gave this one an 8/10. |
| 2006-01-29 11:48:19 | Great Mom Pt. 6 | Hmm, you changed the tense a couple times. You tried writing in first AND third person, and when you wrote in first person narrator you changed the narrator. But if it's just for crazy horny teens then it's a fine piece of literature |
| 2006-04-30 01:48:55 | Great Mom Pt. 6 | I think you should dispense with “My wet tight pussy’ after being fucked that many times and having three kids her pussy would not be that tight. Otherwise a great series. |
| 2006-06-25 14:22:57 | Great Mom Pt. 6 | wasn't the guys name Tom and the father's name Paul? otherwise great story. |