| 2006-10-28 20:28:10 |
Nicki
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very very very very fuckin good. if u havent alredy then u gotta write another one. ill b lookin out for another. i wanted to come when he had her ovr the sawhorse but i managed to delay it. by the way it wasnt too long at all. it was a really good story. good writing i give it a 20/10. my favorite that ive read on this page so far. |
| 2007-03-13 21:23:27 |
Nicki
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That was so mean to stop it there!! Wheres the second part???Gotta have it! |
| 2007-03-20 16:00:56 |
Nicki
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story started out good but turned me off when the uncle stripped her and tied her up wile she was unconsious nothing but a rape story any one who writes these stories should be put in jail nowhere as good as the camp nurse |
| 2007-09-12 21:22:53 |
Nicki
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fucken gay |
| 2007-11-05 21:51:46 |
Nicki
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lara?? |