| 2005-08-12 23:35:58 |
Harry Potter and the Sisters Black Chapter 5
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to tell the truth, the actual idea of the story is totally awsome, but your writing isn't all that great, sorry just telling the truth. keep writing though, i want to see what else happens |
| 2005-08-28 16:59:06 |
Harry Potter and the Sisters Black Chapter 5
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more more more |
| 2005-09-17 17:10:16 |
Harry Potter and the Sisters Black Chapter 5
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good but the kick ass take names is john cena's the pro wrestler |
| 2007-07-31 08:30:57 |
Harry Potter and the Sisters Black Chapter 5
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This is a good sotry. i loved it keep it up. and hurry with the next one. |
| 2005-08-09 08:57:29 |
The Teacher_(0)
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what a story wish i had a fit nymph livin next to me. |