| 2005-08-09 21:13:52 |
The Teacher_(0)
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When a person sits the word is "sit" not "set." Only non-living things "set." People sit. Your lack of understanding for that concept thoroughly distracted me from your story. |
| 2005-08-09 21:55:41 |
The Teacher_(0)
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dam , good read. Well least he now knows how to please a women.Pity he never caught up with her again, that would of been wild. |
| 2005-08-09 22:36:16 |
The Teacher_(0)
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Hell yeah that was fuckin! |
| 2005-08-10 01:12:21 |
The Teacher_(0)
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you really mispelled a lot of shit, i mean orgasims? please, not to mention your lack of correct grammer and the use of the english language, very disappointing, but the story if i over look the atrocious spelling and grammer, is very well written, has a nice feel to it...and had one hell of a major sex scene, wow. i am proud to give this story a 7 ... 10 for story line but 4 for english bravo, write more |
| 2005-08-10 03:49:29 |
The Teacher_(0)
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You did a Great job on the dealtails, hope you met this nancy girl again and write more.. and I'll be glad to read it. |