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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-09-09 14:29:43 | A Green Day bi fantasy | I understand that male sex, can be a spur of the moment, sort of thing, and there is not much build-up, the tensions are too high; but a somewhat extended re-write, could happen. I may have some ideas. Rudbi one |
| 2005-08-09 10:49:28 | Being shared with sister and ex boyfriend | not a bad little story and i kinda liked it'' hurry with next parts and add a mature female to the mix ' like mom or an Aunt and some voyuerism and again ' keep up the good writing |
| 2005-08-09 17:07:33 | Being shared with sister and ex boyfriend | Good story and i liked the ideas but take more time explaining the sex |
| 2005-08-10 02:21:42 | Being shared with sister and ex boyfriend | Next time try to improve the grammar but still a good story 8/10 |
| 2005-08-10 21:50:41 | Being shared with sister and ex boyfriend | Good story, but the threesome part seemed extremely rushed.. there was Soooooo much more you could have done with that if you had taken the time to go into a bit more detail in that part. |